A fine job

Looks very good. Stayed pretty close to Sam Keith's style. Looking forward to more.

More rape, please.

The opening rape sequence was good, but you lost me when you introduced the supporting actors. I guess there were just too many plot twists for me to follow. The ending montage was great! I knew Jack and Diana would never stay together. Overall, I thought you captured the essence of the post-modern Kafkaesque expressionism of man's inhumanity to man. Well done.